喵魔怪 replied at 27-1-2016 15:56 勁!嗯,文筆上,描繪細緻生動,內容上,真實刺激有趣~可以繼續寫續集
Report
浩二 replied at 27-1-2016 17 好詳細 好有心
tiramisu replied at 7-6-2016 23:40 嘩你文筆超好呀~~ 又academic又popular culture又搞笑,好好睇呢~
tiramisu replied at 14-6-2016 17:55 我寫的第一次 >> 我完全唔識作文寫嘢好爛的,但好似唔寫第一次就冇第二次? 碗仔戴啱size好重 ...
Jollyb replied at 5-9-2016 16 寫到好細膩~文筆好好~~~ 好精彩~~~~!!!!
Points Rules Reply post To last page